Fix comma splices for readability across infra and smarthome articles

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a software mixer stage (<code>+20&nbsp;dB</code> via an ALSA softvol plugin) sits between
shairport-sync and the hardware. The hardware mixer itself is deliberately
left fixed at 100% / 0&nbsp;dB, and shairport-sync only ever adjusts its own
internal software volume, this avoids the volume jumps and mixer
internal software volume. This avoids the volume jumps and mixer
conflicts that show up when multiple layers all try to control loudness.</p>
<h2>Bathroom-specific integration</h2>
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@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ that point to better reflect its now-singular focus on the printer.</p>
<h2>Notable OS lesson</h2>
<p>After moving this Pi to a newer OS release, boot configuration files
moved to a new path, editing the old path silently does nothing, which
moved to a new path. Editing the old path silently does nothing, which
is an easy trap when following older notes or tutorials for the same
hardware. The lesson: always verify that configuration changes actually
take effect, especially after OS upgrades on embedded hardware.</p>
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@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ and LED matrix displays.</p>
<h2>Multi-socket power strips</h2>
<p>Several rooms use multi-outlet smart power strips (each socket
individually switchable and metered) rather than single smart plugs, this
individually switchable and metered) rather than single smart plugs. This
keeps things like "washing machine + dryer" or "office desk cluster" on
one strip while still tracking each socket's consumption separately.</p>