diff --git a/src/acoustics/index.md b/src/acoustics/index.md index eb29cb6..f20840f 100644 --- a/src/acoustics/index.md +++ b/src/acoustics/index.md @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ Music has always been a significant part of my life. Since 1995, I have been mix ## Music on Computers -My first attempt at making music was on the computer. I never enjoyed live playing, so I sought a better way to create music. That's when I discovered MOD-Trackers! There are some nice MOD files, but they are very computer-based and don't sound like real music. +My first attempt at making music was on the computer. I never enjoyed live playing, so I sought a better way to create music. That's when I discovered MOD-Trackers. There are some nice MOD files, but they are very computer-based and don't sound like real music. {% pseudonymBox "MOD-file examples (can be played on Winamp)" %} @@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ Electronic techno-steps from 1994: ## Live Synthesizer Music -Later on, we tried to perform some live music. There are two tapes with live music that I will sample very soon. One tape is a live recording from the S.O.N.A.X meets Genital Angriff session in our party room (screenshot follows), and the other is a solo tape from Genital Angriff. +Later on, we tried to perform some live music. There are two tapes with live music that I will digitize very soon. One tape is a live recording from the S.O.N.A.X meets Genital Angriff session in our party room (screenshot follows), and the other is a solo tape from Genital Angriff. {% pseudonymBox "Live Sessions" %} @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ vapeur live session (1992) ## Live Turntable Mixing -I started mixing very late and never aspired to be a big star DJ. I really enjoyed mixing at private parties and smaller events. In the 'DJ examples' box, you can find the latest afro-cosmic-double-mix with my DJ friend Marc le Nain, a live recording at the Private Lounge Party V. +I started mixing later in life and never aspired to be a big star DJ. I really enjoyed mixing at private parties and smaller events. In the 'DJ examples' box, you can find the latest afro-cosmic-double-mix with my DJ friend Marc le Nain, a live recording at the Private Lounge Party V. {% pseudonymBox "DJ Examples" %} diff --git a/src/partners/index.md b/src/partners/index.md index 47ec3e6..bcc61d6 100644 --- a/src/partners/index.md +++ b/src/partners/index.md @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ lastChanged: "5/1/2001" I want to thank some people who helped me during the last 13 years (1988-2001). Matthias -For the best time ever while brainstorming over games, demos, and enhancements of all the tools we developed. And of course, I have to thank you for leading me to the Atari ST and not to the Amiga :) and for the help on all the projects. +For the best time ever while brainstorming about games, demos, and enhancements of all the tools we developed. And of course, I have to thank you for leading me to the Atari ST and not to the Amiga :) and for the help on all the projects. The Elite, M.C.A., and of course the equinox website For the inspiration in demo coding. diff --git a/src/products/index.md b/src/products/index.md index 5b08628..8058af3 100644 --- a/src/products/index.md +++ b/src/products/index.md @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ Over the years of development projects, some products have been released. This s ## The Atari ST Products -On our first project, we quickly learned to code some simple programs. Matthias mainly focused on medium resolution programming and Stefan on high resolution. As we were 12-year-old kids, the type of software we wanted to code was games, although we also coded some nice tools. +On our first project, we quickly learned to code some simple programs. Matthias mainly focused on medium resolution programming and Stefan on high resolution. As 12-year-olds, the type of software we wanted to code was games, although we also coded some nice tools. - International Kegeln and Bowling (1990) Our first release ever. Idea from Matthias (Olympic Arts) and first graphical coding project. The result was a complete Bowling game as a second version of "International Kegeln" simply called Bowling. Sure, it was complete, but never playable. @@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ mainly Stefan, the goal was to build serious applications on the PC. SkyLINE exi SkyLINE Production Releases PHOB!A -was a short-lived PC DemoGroup in 1994. It released the Phobia Welcome Intro, coded in Turbo Pascal with inline assembler, using palette tricks for animation and a custom font. +was a short-lived PC demo group in 1994. It released the Phobia Welcome Intro, coded in Turbo Pascal with inline assembler, using palette tricks for animation and a custom font. PHOB!A Website with Sourcecode {% endpseudonymBox %} @@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ Matthias and I always looked at the famous PC demos and thought about the way to ## The PC Tools - DOSMENU II (1994) - The only boot selector which could change config.sys and autoexec.bat parameters while booting. There has never been a tool like this. Maybe it's useful for you. A must for a DOS machine. + The only boot selector that could change config.sys and autoexec.bat parameters while booting. There has never been a tool like this. It might be useful for you. A must for a DOS machine. [... download (170kB)](https://www.moonweb.org/files/pc/skyline/dosmenu.zip) [... free reg-key by email](mailto:dosmenu-reg-key@moonweb.org)