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@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ Later on, we tried to perform some live music. There are two tapes with live mus

 {% pseudonymBox "Live Sessions" %}

-vapeur livesession (1992)
+vapeur live session (1992)
 <a href="https://soundcloud.com/stefan-koelle/sets/vapeur-livesession-1992" target="_blank">... album on soundcloud</a>

 {% endpseudonymBox %}
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ lastChanged: "5/1/2001"

 Here is a list of key milestones in my IT learning journey.

-## The Personal Dates
+## The Key Dates

 {% pseudonymBox "Personal Dates" %}

@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ its <b>own domain</b>. As everyone can expect, planets.org was already taken, an
 became the domain of the moment.

 <b>So why have I relaunched the design of this domain?</b>
-Sure, there was not much activity in the last two years on moonweb.org, but the main reason to update this page was
+Sure, there has not been much activity in the last two years on moonweb.org, but the main reason to update this page was
 to collect all the projects and products we created over the past 10 years and document them on this webpage.

 <b>Are there still some active projects or new products?</b>
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ Welcome to the new <b>moonweb.org</b> website. After <b>2 years</b> of part-time
 ## The Idea

 Thank you for visiting our page. The idea behind moonweb.org is to build up <b>IT knowledge</b> and to <b>learn from each other</b>.
-Since computer education in schools or colleges here in Germany isn't very comprehensive and often misses out on interesting aspects relevant to business life, we build up our IT knowledge through self-study.
+Since computer education in schools or colleges here in Germany isn't very comprehensive and often misses out on interesting aspects relevant to business life, we built up our IT knowledge through self-study.

 ## The Website

@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ You can also find some general information about the person who played a <b>majo
 Since there is no advertising on my homepage, you probably know who I am, so I will skip the
 standard description of myself. If you want to know more about [me](/stefan/), write me an [email](mailto:who-are-you@moonweb.org).
 I dislike personal websites and often wonder if anyone would actually use this page. I stopped
-worrying about it :) and remembered the main reason I started this website: to document all the information
+worrying about it :) and remember the main reason I started this website: to document all the information
 about my projects so I would never forget anything. That's all.

 ## The Future
@@ -64,10 +64,10 @@ was a short-lived PC DemoGroup in 1994. Released the Phobia Welcome Intro, coded

 ## The PC Intros and Demos

-Matthias and I always looked at the famous PC demos and thought about the way to code them. Some small demo releases to be mentioned have been released.
+Matthias and I always looked at the famous PC demos and thought about the way to code them. Several small demo releases deserve mention.

 - <b>phobia-intro (1994)</b>
-  The best intro ever coded by myself (Stefan). Some faked but looks really good. I will try to make a screenshot soon and put the source and the executable into an archive for download. Meanwhile, you can read something about the PHOBIA and the demo group story. Sorry, the links on this page do not work. <a href="https://www.moonweb.org/phobia/" target="_blank">... read more</a>
+  The best intro ever coded by myself (Stefan). Some parts are faked, but it looks really good. I will try to make a screenshot soon and put the source and the executable into an archive for download. Meanwhile, you can read something about the PHOBIA and the demo group story. Sorry, the links on this page do not work. <a href="https://www.moonweb.org/phobia/" target="_blank">... read more</a>

 - <b>Copperintro (1995)</b>
  A really interesting demo with more than 100 colors in text mode done with Amiga copper-like effects. Does only work on an old 486 PC. Perhaps it will run under Pentium, too. Just test it. [... download (10kB)](https://www.moonweb.org/files/pc/skyline/copperint.zip)
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ In 1992, we started developing on a 486 Intel personal computer using Turbo Pasc

 - <b>Glücksrad (1993)</b>: A 'Wheel of Fortune' inspired game with graphics and PC-Speaker sound.

- <b>Tetris (1994)</b>: A two-player Tetris competition preview, well playable but never finished.
+- <b>Tetris (1994)</b>: A two-player Tetris competition preview, very playable but never finished.

 <b>The PC Intros and Demos</b>
 We were inspired by famous PC demos and released some small demo projects.
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ phone: +49-89-20006547
 email: stefan.koelle@moonweb.org

 Favourite radio station: <a href="https://fm4.orf.at/" target="_blank">FM4</a>
-Favourite internetradio: <a href="https://somafm.com/" target="_blank">Soma FM</a>
+Favourite internet radio: <a href="https://somafm.com/" target="_blank">Soma FM</a>
 Favourite electronic band: <a href="https://www.autechre.ws" target="_blank">Autechre</a>

 ## links